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Nothing Else Matters

Dreams once distant
Trickle down from above
A blossoming friendship
Is now pure love

A love so simple
Known by few
Made up of hearts
Once broken into

Learning together
Without losing touch
That nothing else matters
When you love this much

And two lonely souls
That were once torn apart
Now flourish again
With love straight from the heart

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  • Lactar Wolfgang
    December 2, 2008
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    stunning

    as always i love your work


  • NurseHayley
    November 17, 2007
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    The Jennster returns!

    Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy You are back too I am making more of an effort to write just now so expect to see me about here more

    As usual Jenn, you write so beautifully. I can never rhyme as fluidly as you do. This just trips off the tongue like the last tequilla after a long night out lol!

    *hugs mucho*


  • X iMPERFECTiON x
    November 9, 2007

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    very nice!! i love it =] (btw, i think "into" was supposed to be "in two" in the second paragraph) great job and good luck!!! =]