Poisoned angel feathers
falling to the earth,
blazing into fire,
the Creator's perfect punishment.
Author notes
Global warming is God's punishment for all the wrong human beings have done.
A contest entry
- 14 words by lee-sharp.
14000 points, ended November 24, 2007, 66 entries
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So well-written for so few words; you've conveyed this marvelously, and the message remains intact. I don't believe in God, but in any case, the degeneration of this beautiful world is the worst punishment conceivable. God or not, an unprotected, trashed earth will bring us no good.
Great piece.
--Cristina -
Wow, even with just a short poem it's scary... People really do not understand what they are doing, this poem in these simple lines tell everything. Beautiful poem my dear =]
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omg~! Short and sweet. This is pretty cool. Global warming is evil T-T
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