watching, from afar,
nature
turns toward
the winds
from the riffraff
of smut smog
A contest entry
- 14 words by lee-sharp.
14000 points, ended November 24, 2007, 66 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I liked your description of nature itself wanting to be Upwind of "smut smog"! Very nice.
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Thanks ... glad you liked it
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I wonder if its the wolf or hawk that has this fragrance scent. interesting write of thoughts.
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Thanks
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oooh you saw DEEP into the picture - nicely done, I like how you focused on what he was looking at - good luck in this contest!!
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thanks, glad you liked this one
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