heart ripped out
my lifes not what it used to be.
he raped me when I was thirteen
going up stairs
I sit on his bed
we play video games untill ten
He go's to the door and locks it
he says don't worry nothings going to happen
I try to run but I am frozen
he pushes me on his bed
and I try to scream
every thing that is happening next is very unsean
He holds my wrist and than he starts to kiss
I don't know what he's doing it's all in a fog
I wish that this was all over
he tells me to stop crying
or he will start lying
he is done he zipps up his pants
let's go of my wrist and hands.
I walk down stairs
I sit on the couch
my head is spinning and i can't get out
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A tough one to read but so important
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Again, I am at a loss for words here......My heart aches with this knowledge and my blood boils for revenge. My sorrow for you knows no bounds....
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I don't know how you feel but my heart bleeds for you. my oldest child was abused and it's a pain that never goes away.
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wow this is harder to read then it was to hear it out baby
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It got the point across. Good poem. Good luck in the contest.
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