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Perfection Achieved

Let's be perfect.
There's always forever,
Coming to a close.
Be yourself - perfection achieved.

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The closest thing to perfection we'll ever have.

A contest entry

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  • TwilightDazzles
    November 9, 2007

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    Wow, you have done so very well with this. And you have penned such truth!!! I just love the last line!! 14 words has been a challenge but you have done beautifully! Best wishes in the contest


  • BeautifulFlame
    November 9, 2007

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    Very greatly worded i enjoyed this read, wow 14 words are hard to do when you really not sure of whats expected. Your was great!
    I write more love heart stuff.
    lol
    Goodluck
    ~Lisa~