You, Coltrane, and
the setting sun
“My Favorite things”
Though,
"you’re all I need"
Author notes
or if one is feeling a little less romantic the last line could always be switched up to say:
"Maybe not in that order". (heehee)
A contest entry
- 14 words by lee-sharp.
14000 points, ended November 24, 2007, 66 entries
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nice piece
is you're one or two words tho -
Lovely piece.
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nice write, you put a lot into 14 words...great job =)
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A bullet of a closing line, darling, embedding itself in hearts and souls. Well, mine, at any rate. I love just the entire concept of this poem. VERY thoughtful and insightful. Definitely verses for those of us who are romantics at our most primal level.
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this ones my favorite thus far.
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Very well done!
goodluck
~Lisa~
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