In my little world,
I can't see you,
I know you as the bad man,
Why do what you do?
No one else does these things,
I don't want to die,
You said you'd kill me if I speak,
So I whisper to my dolls they listen to me cry,
It's they that know my secrets,
The feelings that I hide,
The dark that dwells inside me,
While my face shows lies,
Bittersweet, it's over,
But still my torture goes on,
It wasn't once you raped me,
Everyday, it lives on,
If only once it happened,
Maybe I could live,
But more than once, forever,
So I cannot forgive,
I should have one thing,
That should be innocence,
But you took it all away,
With your wicked experience,
The sound still hurts my ears,
Your stink still on my skin,
Your grotesque manifestation,
That you thrust within,
I resent you for your actions,
I hate you for hurting me,
I'll wear the scars of actions,
They're a trophy, for me,
I shouldn't have to cut,
To make you go away,
My arms are scarred forever,
You're with me every day,
For me, now life is over,
Now all I want to do is die,
You have no remorse,
You are one great lie,
I hope that you will suffer,
For all you did to me,
For though my life gets tougher
I'm stronger than you...you see,
Author notes
I chose child abuse as it's something close to my heart and pains me so much. Dmonik helped me with this one and he did a great job Perfect Dmonik, a job well done,
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Very touching
Hey,
You did a really good job. This is a sad poem and it gets right into the emotions and thoughts of what it is like to be abused as a child. It also goes into the effects very well. I feel you chose some very powerful words too.
Thanks for entering my contest, and the best of luck to you!!
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Stunned
if this is what you have expierienced my heart goes out towrad you. i know of abuse (though not the type you write of)
if you havent gone through this you have a great insight on how it feels
Bravo and Brave"O"
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I loved it is an absolute brilliant fabulous and unique poem onme of the best i have ever read. well done all the best for the future
nightmare xx
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Powerful write you two, a job well done, it flows very well.
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Thanks Bell
Glad you enjoyed this write
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This is a straightforward poem that shoves each word in the reader's face. Very angry and bitter, and emotion fills each line. Great write.
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OMG! this is very deep and moving. i love the emotions in the poem.
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Thank you very much
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We did well
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