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(B)egging the Question

Love recipe  

 

 

Who puts all eggs in one basket
bawls all begs in one ask it

 

 

Love recipe 

 

Author notes

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Background Anja
http://flickr.com/photos/blondepowers/2304820764/


pic 1 Tina Manthorpe Egg Basket
http://flickr.com/photos/84265607@N00/2357470326/

Pic Egg Love Recipe
http://flickr.com/photos/49677886@N00/464229946/

Pic 2 phive

http://flickr.com/photos/phive/2229670230/

pic : descending egg http://flickr.com/photos/grjenkin/1388629026/

 

 

 

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  • Roseamongweeds
    October 30
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    Alright, it's very creative but I just don't see the link to the contest.


  • Stolen memories
    August 16

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    It took me a few reads to get it but that is a great way to put it.. amazing. I love how you used eggs to symbolize it all.. wonderful.. it really made me think and its true if you gamble everything you stand a chance to lose it all. Its a great metaphor.
    This one is good I like the whole aspect of it.

    Rhyme +20
    Under two lines +30
    PP +5
    Option +5

    Total: 60/60pt's

    Brownie
    I really really liked this one how you used something else to symbolize it all.. amazing.. the pics were dreadfully annoying BUT it was great.. +20

    TOTAL 80pt's

    Just amazing, AP really needs more poets like you, I would really like to give you some constructive criticism on your poem but I cant, it was fine. I think you should use this quote and take it through life its a good one to have.

    Thank you, and good luck


  • joshieod
    August 5

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    I really liked this. Didn't understand it but I still read it many times over. I loved the background images you chose. Gives a warm and friendly mood. Excellent work and good luck in the contest.


  • LilyRose
    July 24

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    The images laid down with your words are breathtaking and the experience of sighting in are your words was a perfect match for reflecting upon their meaning...very original, well done


  • ItaloEtkin
    April 7
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    this is so well done.. and smart


  • suseann
    April 16, 2008
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    I likey mucho! You've written one. Now where's the other nine asked for? I suppose this is far easier said than done. I couldn't do it. However,I believed we here on AP had time and enough humor in the ol' funny bones to master the challenge.Thanks for entering this.


  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    November 23, 2007
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    dog gone, it, of course
    I wonder.





  • Night Hope gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    I likes it, Scribe. Good luck in the contest, my Friend. Wanda


  • Southern Darling
    November 9, 2007

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    lol. Witty, darling. Like Lisa, I am laughing while sitting here attempting to puzzle it out. It's abrupt, fast paced, and snapping with its delivery. Well done.


  • BeautifulFlame
    November 9, 2007

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    This made me laugh trying to figure it out..a riddle huh, okay i will figure it out soon as kids leave lol
    Great 14 words!
    I loved it!
    ~Lisa~

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