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Ode to Cupid

To the one i love
Im sorry for this mess.
I wonder.
What made me miss.
Her smile. Her taste.
Was it you..?
But I'll go on
And We'll move on.
But, will we regret.

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  • Remember3
    November 27, 2007
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    Most will regret.
    I love your style, its so unique. Keep it up!


  • mourningmonday
    November 9, 2007

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    hmm... simple and short. its good to see something from you! and its pretty nice. maybe you and me should get together and write a poem.