Smoke filled visions,
darkened paths of destruction.
Filters tainted, yellowish grime
mouth encloses the odor.
A stress reliever,
an emotional deceiver.
Life’s lost through nicotine eyes.
Author notes
Prompt
Nicotine Eyes
Love you scott
A contest entry
- Nicotine Eyes by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended November 15, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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very profound piece, but I like it all the same
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This is an excellent write about nicotine. The lines:
A stress reliever,
an emotional deceiver.
Powerful lines here with such a clear message of the true addictiveness of nicotine. Really enjoyed reading this. Good luck with your entry. Julie.
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This is a really strong, strong piece. As someone else said, I'm sure if you made it into an advertisement or the like, many would be impacted by it and want to stop smoking.
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Oh this is like WHOA!!!
Love it good luck to you in the contest
Delila
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Oh, I see what you were talking about now!!! ROFL, like anybody would have a naked picture of you but ME.
Unless you accidentally sent one to somebody else??? 
Love you baby, well done...Scott 
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This will keep people from smoking.
I was at one of Allan's poems and I saw the naked picture of you, you're very pretty. Good luck in this contest, this poem is great!
Love,
Amera♥
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