In a world of torment and sorrow
A life filled with anguish
Needs some place to go
Needs someone to give their love.
Standing at a crossroad
Without a sign
Of which path it is
That I should take.
A beauty basking in the rays of sun
Needs someone
To dry each tear
And who could be the one.
I cannot see what’s to come
Nor do I feel that I am wrong
Because all that I choose to do
Is stay right here loving you.
A heart that’s been broken
Needs time to heal
And someone so true
To be right there loving you.
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I loved it
Amazing as always your awesome -
I loved it
keep it up
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Excellent
Wow, I love it, and I love your page, I am impressed. I wish you all the luck.
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such a loving write of love, of the feelings you have and shared. i wish you many happy returns and your love will grow together.
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love it
i have to say this one struck me as being a lil different then some of your others, but non the less it is still great don't ever stop
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we all need someone to hold in that time of trouble with this world of woe.
You have me smiling with this my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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This poem is very touching and seems very personal to the author...
I can feel the truth and sincerity because as myself I often write my feelings out in the form of poetry. I've had a lot of heartache in my life, but I still believe in true love. As soon as I read it I wanted to read another one because it touches your heart once you read it.
I AM AN INSTANT FAN!
~~GRACE~~
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I agree with the people below
Very heartfelt indeed
Just thought I come through a read a few of yours
So be looking forward to more comments
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i love your poems.
great job.
great poem here.
-yourpalbones
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This is a very heartfelt piece that you wrote here and the ending is so true. Your words touched my heart deeply and I thank you for sharing them with me. It is beautiful. You have a loving soul. Keep writing poet. seamaiden ♥
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this is really awesome. heartfelt. great write!
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aww this is so very beautiful. Love is such a wonderful thing and I enjoy so much reading all kinds of love poems.
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oh by the way this is my favorite
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i love this
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as amazing as all your other pieces!
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i agree a broken heart takes a special person to heal
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They say time heals, but I think that love does a better job. And sometimes, you have to do the loving. Very nice write, I really feel the confusion of which way to go. I like the crossroads without a sign metaphore. Sometimes you just have to close your eyes and let your heart choose.
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A lovely, lovely poem here. We all need someone to love and care for us, especially when a heart has been broken. this poem touched my heart very much. Take care, Julie.
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Wow
Cor really feel this one too lovely poetry thank you for sharing it
Teresa Rose
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Great work!!!
Your words were very soothing
simple yet bautifully done
This write is filled with great emotions ....truly sweet
The last stanza was my fav...so true
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what a beautiful display of love... the kind that everyone looks for.
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oh this was so well written wonderful words and flow
great work
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this is beautiful!!!!!
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NICE!!!!!!!
Another awesome penning you have produced here. We write a lot alike!
POETDONTKNOWIT
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beautiful promising words!!! Loved the measage of this write!
Love~
Az
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this poem reflects that love that many people can only dream of tasteing. that innocent, rolling through the daisies kind of love. something about it almost reminds me of a personal vowe. kind of like when people renew their vowes after years of a sucessful healthy marriage. i just noticed this was in a contest, i hope you place or placed well. this is a wonderful write.
XoXo
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aww that is very cute and so true. great write. i think this is a very good piece.
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This is breathtaking and so full of love and emotion. Elagant and graceful.
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Wow
Joel hun this is really a very beautiful poem that is full of tender innocent love that is very rae in this world... your simple words that flow like clean himalyan waterfalls have captured eh beauty of your heart... yes heart break takes some time to heal, but it heals, telling from experience, scar though remains but no more pain... this is really another masterpiece of yours... with your talent, it's easy to get noticed... take care Minoo
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Joel
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GOOD
Nice. This is such a sincere poem ...thanks for entering!
Love, Raneika
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this is really good. i have felt that way many times before, so i understand this piece completely.
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Awesome
Short but powerful, sad but beautiful i love this one, theres alot in there. and means alot to the right person
I cannot see what’s to come
Nor do I feel that I am wrong
Because all that I choose to do
Is stay right here loving you
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Heart is healed in restful river of sacred water soothing rock to wash in cleaner rippled wonder...speaking verse in wilder exhale...lovely...
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this is truly lovely
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So true.
These words are so true. I can feel the heart waiting for that special someone. Great work.
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