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Life


 

 

I love, I laugh, I cry

a continuing cycle
of the transmutation of being

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • zochit2me gold member
    November 23, 2007

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    Me too and yes it is an never ending cycle.

    Becky

    How the hell are you?


  • ellipsist
    November 17, 2007

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    yup... I transposed letters... thought it mentioned the masturbation of being... must have been what I wanted to see...

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    November 12, 2007
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    Simply put and so exact. Nicely done.


  • sheltered
    November 10, 2007
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    That it is.


  • Southern Darling
    November 9, 2007

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    Mm... This is really deep, and really base. It does not capture essence, it IS essence. Simple. You are to be commended


  • BeautifulFlame
    November 9, 2007
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    Very well done ! A wonderful use of poetic words!
    Goodluck in the contest!
    ~Lisa~

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