I tried so hard,
To understand,
Why you walked away,
And left me alone.
A contest entry
- 14 words by lee-sharp.
14000 points, ended November 24, 2007, 66 entries
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Sometimes it doesn't always make sense, sometimes people just... well, leave. My sisters ex did that and so did mine and I will always wonder the whole reason but as I said on someone elses post on this contest, there's not always a reason, even the person themselves doesn't always know. Sometimes it just happens. Sorry you know how it feels, though.
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Very Realistic!
This is a very good write for the contest. Also, something close to many peoples hearts. Most of us at some point in our lives deal with this. Many times, it's something we can never understand. Often times, it's the best thing for us. That is not always easy to see at the time it happens though.
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Some things are just not understandable.
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DARK, darling. But simple. The contrast is marked, but all the more effective for it. It's disturbing, almost. Well done.
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Very simple and understandable ! Great job on a sad 14 words.
Goodluck
~Lisa~
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