a possibility peeks over the crest of the mountain,
first light of anticipation illuminates my being
will there be warmth~
or will the sun shiver behind a cloud ?
A contest entry
- When Poetry Embraces As Kindred Sigh by kaibab.
1125 points, ended November 10, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such a poetic quiz to morning's fizzle of what mind find the poets fingers...as dance in prancing inspiration, to open heart in every facet...thanks so much for this lovely piece
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Beautiful write. I liked the ending. It made me think of how a lot of us feel about love sometimes. if we will be happy or if we will have to endure heartbreak. Good luck in the contest.
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very interesting. i love the brevity of this write. you leave so much open air for the reader to fill in the blanks. i will definitely be pondering this one later tonight. never stop writing
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Thank you
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*love*
May sunshine seep
through wetted trees
as rainbows
coalesce in
visioned valley.
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wow, that's better than the poem
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well I don't know about that but
you do inspire me.
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