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Sweet and simple all that's asked
With this word all men are tasked
Love

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  • Southern Darling
    November 9, 2007

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    *breaks into song* "Sweet and simple/All that's asked/With this word/ All men are tasked/ Lah-hah-ove..."

    Soz, darling. Couldn't help myself. It sounds like song lyrics. Witty and too the point. I like it.


  • BeautifulFlame
    November 9, 2007

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    Oh so clever! This is very true.
    Although, is it a task to love?
    Great write
    Goodluck
    ~Lisa~


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    Men know love is what they seek
    Words a plenty they do speak
    The way to reach a woman's heart
    Is romance given from the start

    If love between the sexes binds
    No tasks to hard, the eyes it blinds
    So men don't think your life is hard
    Just take a lesson from the Bard!


    • cricketjeff gold member
      November 9, 2007
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      Rhyming ladies left and right
      For an old romantic this is right!
      Love's a word that's often said
      To tempt a partner into bed
      Religions too have used this word
      Some in ways just too absurd
      But if we all love fellow man
      Can things improve? You know they can!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    Love is just a common word,
    spread about always heard.
    most of time there is no meaning,
    for they are the ones always scheming.
    Tossed about
    the word they shout
    I love you
    but baby we are through.

    Yes they are wacked
    and this poet cracked.
    well done
    and best wishes
    Tory

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