Escapable avenues of opportunities arranged in subtly clued out-lets of life's domain. Awaiting you!
A contest entry
- 14 words by lee-sharp.
14000 points, ended November 24, 2007, 66 entries
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very well constructed for the prompt . . good luck in the contest !!
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Thanks so much, I tried
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Great job, especially getting the meaning done in such a short verse.
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Thank you
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There's almost a sing-songy quality about it. It's simple, a nursery rhyme line without the annoying story plot behind it. It sounds like something a mother would sing to her child upon thrusting wide the curtains in the morning to invite the sunshine into the darkened bedroom. Clever.
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I agree very clever and wonderfully done
Goodluck
~Lisa~
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Thanks so much, Lisa, I wasn't sure how this sounded hahaha or if it made much sense hahaha
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This was wonderful very clever and masterfully done
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Thanks so muchlol
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