Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Waiting...Missing You



I see your face behind closed eyes
feel your breath against my skin

my heart walled in the mortar of despair
I have never felt this way before

nor want to feel this way again


listening to the songs we share

connecting with you in the only way I can
until you're here in my arms

how I wish my heart could fly
over oceans deep and wide
if only my love could give me wings

I would come to you and hold you
it might be only for a moment
but a moment's all I need
to fill this emptiness within
until you're home safe with me again

 

 

 

 

Author notes


Option #1


In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    December 7, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is such a beautiful piece of writing, exactly what I am looking for. You have expressed the emotion perfectly. Well done and thankyou for entering


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 10, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Just beautiful! Such tender, loving imagery held in your words
    All the best in the contest.
    Gaylene

  • Amarige
    November 9, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Oh my dear one..you brought tears to my eyes..believe me I know that feeling ..been there...this was so touching to my heart..you did wonderful job..I hope he come home back safe to you sweetheart
    Amarige


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 9, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    my god i wish you could fly to me..your poem makes me feel i am missing something great good luck margaret xx