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Momentum

Each star smile
seeing..rolling between flowed 
golden love of poetry
to reflect past moments.
Wills pulsate, 
live stunned.
each prophet sings
a truth
oscillate pointers of corner.
Lakes impulse lives.
feet touch land, mind, sky.
Abysses float,
to park the soul!
Mirrored in time,
Catch verse,
reverse I feel.

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  • kaibab silver member
    November 10, 2007

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    Words roll round in abstract cloud billowing surge in cotton waves seeking page to stain in secret...lovely


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    November 9, 2007
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    Great Stuff ,love it


    Expressive and Powerful love the emotional dimension, a visual journey. Great wording. It was a joy to read your work nothing to change. I look forward to your next write. Like these line>>>

    to reflect past moments.
    Wills pulsate,
    live stunned.
    each prophet sings
    a truth