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At the stroke of midnight









I understood
its new definition



when you spilled
l
o
  v
      e
      on my chapped lips



A dried river was filled with clear waters
beside






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  • Swan song gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    Oh! this is truly wonderful from top to bottom my ypou have penned some lovely writes the last three poems of your have just been stunning!

    • Ankeeta silver member
      November 10, 2007
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      maybe its straight from the heart

      thanks ya

      A


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    HOW SWEET!!!

    For sure, when love enters ones heart it takes away all of ones suffering and sorrow.

    • Ankeeta silver member
      November 9, 2007
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      true but one should be very clear about the real definition of love ....and not get fooled by those hypocrites who abuse its meaning by faking it by their own selfish ways!


      thanks ya

      A