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Rose Perfume

Walking softly by a garden gate
 A rose perfume calls to me

Evoking lost hidden memories
Of things that will never be

I see her softly crying yet
As I quickly walked away

Her last words haunt me still
In this place where I lay

Remember me was all she asked
How then could I lose it all

For pride and pain and a tear
For my weakness not to call

That lost moment will call to me
On this lonely road I walk

Through time now everlasting
On eternity's slow endless clock

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 20, 2007
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    This is beautiful. I really enjoyed the read.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 13, 2007
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    So beautiful!! Wistful and sad...

    This really touched me! Great writing!