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Forgetting What's You.

Heart beats.  Rhythms of the dark.
Windows to the inside of what is.
Fast feet. Fleeting to the Soul.
Forget what I used to be.

Directing the madness, forgetting what's true
deep inside, all around, forgetting what's you.

Faster. Running escaping the fire.
Burning and singeing the earth.
crawling. groveling beginning again.
madness that won't let you be.

Directing the madness, forgetting what's true
deep inside, all around, forgetting what's you.

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Just feeling dark today.

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  • Rivkah Lynn
    November 11, 2007
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    This is such a great write. *claps* you never cease to amaze me. I feel like this somedays.. I think you wrote out what I feel sometimes. It is so easy to get lost in this world, even in our husbands and forget who we are. This is so well done. I can not wait to read from your pen again.


  • theprodigalsister
    November 10, 2007
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    LoveloveLOVE line sets 2 & 4... Sounds like song lyrics. Try to work them into a song