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Invisible draping
found at the end
of our smoked-
rainbow [our death].
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Written November 9, 2007
A contest entry
- speaks in purple by Cat.
700 points, ended November 14, 2007, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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the shroud that circles us right before perhaps- the one that we can't see with the naked eye but some random camera captures and it takes your breath away after the person has passed and there it is..
or the letting go of soul immediatly after shrouded in purple haze-
or something altogether different- what i like this piece is that the simplicity allowed it to be my piece when i read it to interpret however i chose
m -
very nicely done...
thanks for entering it here
al -
i got a lost feeling at the end of the rainbow..like all was not as imagined, the colours were not so vibrant and the purples and greys got muddied along towards the end of the ride. i want/need to believe death holds more underneath it's drape than 'the end of the rainbow' i think i thought about this write too much
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Excellent
Short, but so well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Conundrum. This is simply beautiful, as in death - we are.
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