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"Kevin ' You Are In My Thoughts Today

The resurgence of our life that we shared,
quality, warmth, appreciation and our unconditional love.
Recollected thoughts of you today, ponder my mind with pride,
for you were my dreams come true my dear husband.
When Jesus took you away from me he left my soul,
limp and numb in a monastic way.
Kevin you had always loved my hoyden approach to life,
something my love you had never experienced.
You are in my thoughts today as our spiritual bodies,
rekindled the love and passion we once shared.
If only time could of stood still you could of waited.
but it was not his will and you could not wait.
I will always remember your arms holding me,
always full of  love and protection.
The way you would lift me up like a baby to carry me ,
cradled into your chest.
Relief falls once again

 as we slowly travel the still waters.

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  • psychiatrists dream
    December 10, 2007
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    lovely poem, thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Rana
    November 12, 2007

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    This was a great read, but the last few lines were just beyond beautiful and very emotional. Thank you for entering!


  • DrunkenRam
    November 11, 2007

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    Guilty

    Your love for your husband must have been really intense,
    He left a lucky man.
    Went out on top, thats important to us guy's.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 9, 2007
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    Must have missed this one sorry its great congrats for the trpohy


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    The way you would lift me up like a baby to carry me ,
    cradled into your chest.
    Relief falls once again

    as we slowly travel the still waters.


    This is indeed a deep verse revealing the truth of
    your soul and touching the depth of this universal philosphy of love...my friend..your words are truely bringing a kind of the flow having the revealation about the life behind its presentation..well done..and thanks for the entry in my contest...


  • TheClimb
    November 9, 2007

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    For some reason instead of finding this sad, I found it uplifting ya know. This a very special heartfelt tribute 'n I think that it's beautiful..

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