To share is to anticipate hurt,
To watch another not receive
What you offer to them freely.
To touch is to take without concern,
To know exactly what you need
Without questioning another’s view.
I touch her smoothness
And excite her with my fingers.
We stand in a doorway in a shadow
My back is towards the university hallway,
My eyes face her lips and we kiss.
To not share is to accept defeat,
To lose a battle that gives growth.
To not touch is to abandon experience,
To know exactly what you need
But never willing to take to succeed.
Author notes
In loving and expressing our love, we do find victory in life, therefore when we do not have the courage to display our love from within, we are emotionally defeated.
Let me know what you think
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I like this poem,,Great write
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Incredible
I had to read it a third time! I love it so much! Five stars***** -Fate -
Deep feelings of emotions does have a tendency to defeat us.
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outstanding
i absolutely admire your writing. your words/poems are so meaningful and inspiring. they make me think about life and this write especially makes me think of how i view love.
!~&&GOOD WRITE&&~!
<3 brit
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Your words have an ability to touch whoever reads them. This is so simply put that it takes my breath away with the honesty of the emotions. I don't know how I missed it before.
Margaret
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Very nice! i love that it doesn't rhyme but it still has that poetry fow with it!.
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This is very romantic , A lovely write
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I like how it doesn't rhyme.
Honestly this is the first piece I've read on love that DOESN'T rhyme.
I like it a lot.
Our two styles differ in many ways, but in some other way I can still relate to this.
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so pretty and well written i rlly rlly like it btw u r so sweet thank u r a truely amazing writting Best blessings, life + giggles--Fate btw i wrote new poems plz read
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great as always
Oneal
I am so grateful for the gift that you have. You are able to write so beautifully and that is wonderful. You capure so much emotion with your words. I wish I was half as talented as you are. I was filled with joy when I logged on here today and saw you had a new poem becuase I knew it would be awesome and it is.
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Oooh, very sensual and smoking hot poetry! You weaved the words to display the picture and story so well. The meaning behind the poem is also very profound. Beautiful, beautiful work!
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This is such a beautifu poem with so much depth. You have witten so many beautuful words. "To share is to antipate hurt". This is so beautiful, well done.
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Beautiful
You're sooo talented, this one is really nice, probz one of my faves. This poem 'hits the nail on the head' so to speek. I Love it XD
lexxy xxxx
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I cant stop reading this cityboy! i love your writing! so emotional and it really captures the moment... i love it more and more everytime i read it
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wow
I was hoping for a longing peom Oneal, and yes, I loved it that's why I was hoping for it to be longer. For mu emotion in this poem it makes me want to find love even harder! I want some one to hold me close to. All of the poem was very good to the title and the end keep writing
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Hi,
Dis poem is great u did a great job on this poem. Keep da ink flowing. loved the way this poem is formed and placed into a imagnery place like in school setting great poem.
To share is to anticipate hurt,
To watch another not receive
What you offer to them freely.
To touch is to take without concern,
To know exactly what you need
Without questioning another’s view.
Great and wonderful poem u done great work
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Wow. You did an excellent job with this. I loved it.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Oneal,
your poetry moves me to tears sometimes, they are so emotion packed...i loved it!
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Wow. I really like this. The message is wonderful and the way it's written is amazing.
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Powerful and very well written. Great message in this piece. It made me think of how people have to feel comfortable with themselves in order to express love to others. Keep writing.
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A familiar story! I can't tell if it's the same one from your book or if it's slightly changed. Either way I love it as I love all your poetry! Great job dear brother! You are turly amazing!
Miss Marie
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sweetie you are so amazing i loved this poem like bunches thanks for shareing this with everyone i loved it great poem ..xxxxx
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wow this is great i knew u were a great writter
keep it up
love
your friend
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Wonderful
This is beautifully sensual. I do like the last verse, you have got your message across flawlessly. The flow and rhyme is superb. Very well written!
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A touch whether physical or over the miles, one must express the love they have within. What a soft moment you share with us here, and a message that resounds with Truth.
~B.
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Beautiful. Your notes are also clever. How do you know if your alive if you don't feel. Wonderful write!
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Yay, Finally (and well worth the wait)
This is a very beautiful poem and you really get a sense of feeling and emotion in it.
Well done, this is absolutely beautiful.
The Black Poet
PS: and well done on getting 9 comments within 3hrs of publishing! You're in high demand Oneal!
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WOw. Such sensuality and beauty in this write. Perfect balance of emotions. Wonderfully written, especially the last lines. Beautiful, my friend, beautiful!
~Namita
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very beautifully woven piece
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I feel the sensitivity of this writeyou bring a real feeling of emotion. Your lines ease into my mind and as i leave i am left with the lingering thoughts of taking the chance in life for love. Thank you for the pleasure of this beautiful read.
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Sometimes you just have to reach out. It can be difficult, but if you want it, it's okay to ask nicely...with a gentle kiss. Then you're having a different sort of conversation.
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looks like others have beaten me too it this morning Oneal! lovely write, very romantic and a very pleasant to read/ check out some of my new poems on love, I'd appreciate your thoughts on them.
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quite lovely Oneal. I very much enjoyed this piece. Deep emotions expressed here.
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wow
this is real, i like it, so true! Your words match this expression very well! Creative and well written!
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