Everlasting moment,
formed within ones mind.
Reality disguised,
hidden beneath ones lies.
Yesterdays memories,
todays misconceptions.
Shattered dreams,
unearthed relics, formerly.
Past and present,
unleashed, set to collide.
Heart and mind set,
need silenced, to survive.
A contest entry
- Have it in you? by Hectic Michelle.
600 points, ended December 9, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice! makes you think! good luck!
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Looking into the past to find the way of the future, sollides on the present and finds that survival is a stronger instinct than need. Very profound and meaningful.
Mouser
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Your thoughts and emotions are always written so deeply in your words. Last stanza is my favorite, for I have felt this often...and only silence can give the peace needs to keep a mind sane.
Lovely job.
Love,
sis
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This is truly an inspiring piece.
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Girl you have most impressive talent to express thoughts and emotions so well. This is an incredible write. I wish you much happiness and peace through out each day.
Jeannie
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Past and present,
unleashed, set to collide.
Heart and mind set,
need silenced, to survive.
This is indeed a deep verse revealing the truth of
your soul and touching the depth of this universal philosphy of lIFE...my friend..your words are truely bringing a kind of the flow having the revealation about the life behind its presentation..well done..
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