Kissing & hugging
Licking & sucking
Touching & caressing
Loving & fucking
Cumming & cumming
Loving & fucking
Touching & caressing
Licking & sucking
Kissing & hugging
This is what you had
This is what you miss
This is what you cherished
This is what you loved
This is what you left
Now I'm glad you had it
Glad you miss it
Glad you cherished it
Glad you loved it
Yes, this what you left
Me
In a list
A contest entry
- Relationships..pain and happiness! by SuiCiDaLKiSs.
410 points, ended June 9, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Kissing
hugging
touching
caressing
licking
sucking
loving
fucking
cumming...
this is what every boy or girl wants...
cherishes...
remembers...
You put all these sweet activities in a poem for us...
thanks, sweetie, for the creative activity that you shared with us....
Kisses, hugs....and much more, my love!
Galaxy2
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This is really powerful and just keeps handing out blows to whoever has pissed you off. Very strong. I do feel that you could add more to it and split it into stanzas, but then again - it is very aggresive just as it is. Very good!
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There - take that!! never know until its gone. lol.
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Ok, sis
ephiphany♥
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ALRIGHT !!! I hear you...
Somebody is going to be missing something,
and someone is going to be sorry LoL
Great poetry, my friend
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Pure Poetic Genuis
This is why Ilike your style.
"Kissing & hugging
Licking & sucking
Touching & caressing
Loving & fucking
Cumming & cumming"
If I could be that person I would have appreciated all that and continued to keep those actions with you. You are just amazing at how you can express your self. I want to be just like you one day. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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WOW... keep writing
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