There are 3 angels in my life
But they don't say they are
Forever looking out for me
And catching me before I fall
The first angel's my Dad
He's the strongest one
Endlessly looking for ways
For us to know life's meaning
The second angel's my Mom
She's the peaceful one
Her beautiful wings cover us all
And warms our hearts within
The last angel's my little brother
Always finding ways to create trouble
But if my life is without him
Then surely, it's not worth living
My angels put the smile on my face
And put me on the right path
These angels in disguise of mine
Are the jewels of my life
Author notes
nothing can express my gratitude for what my family has done for me (:
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Sweet !!
Family love is a treasure, this poem is sweet!!
Blessings
Rend
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What a wonderful poem to the
people in your life. For these
are the true angels that are with
us every day throughout it all.
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Hi,
This is a very beautiful entry, a fitting tribute to a loving family. I loved it. The verse about the brother reminded me of my own little guy, and your words reflect EXACTLY how I feel about him! Congratulations on the great write.
Hugz,
Sunflower.
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It doesn't rhyme as well as I would have liked but it's still a good poem
It's good to see that you see your family as angels and not hindrance's as some people.
Thanks for the good poem and good luck!
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Beautiful poem!
This is so sweet. How fortunate you and your family members are!
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I have read this before, my thoughts haven't changed, it's still lovely. Thanks for entering.
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how beautiful ...
your poem is a ray of sunshine for all who read it ... and I am sure that your family must be very touched about your heartfelt homage you just offered here through your verse of gratitude ...
I have the feeling that each of them considers you as their own personal angel as well, have you already thought about this ?
I am truly touched by your words and the joyful innocence they carry ... they touched a place within me where I can recognize this same gratitude about life and its abundant gifts ...
thank you so much for sharing your soul with us, little angel,
maa
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wow!
I missed this one out and am kicking myself now.
I loved how you describe each member of your family. The dad is the sole breadwinner and the strong one and it seemed so nice reading this.
the description of your mom is amazing and it is often true it is the mother gelling the family together.
your brother's description is cute but so true.
I am sure it feels nice to have a sibling. Such a nice family you have.hope it stays like this forever.
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That's lovely. Thank you for the personal piece! I have those in my life that this reminded me of! Thanks again for entering and good luck.
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