We all exist in an age of digital damnation,
wondering where we lost control.
Now my mortal coil lay waste,
replaced,
by a silicon soul.
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David Silveira
Leamington, Ontario, Canada
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A contest entry
- Contest: Picture Prompt by Medea.
600 points, ended November 24, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very star trekkie pic that looks a lot like the borg. yes I watched these shows. One can equate this to us who are addicted to the internet.lol.
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Oh I like this and it leaves an impression for sure! it is a little short but I love it all the same and will be wonderful in the book! Love it!!!
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Wow. Short and provocative. Deffinately deep thoughts, and the pic is amazing!
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I like the first 2 lines:
We all exist in an age of digital damnation,
wondering where we lost control.
Very True -
yeah that's true- nice thoughts
"silicon soul?"
Does that mean you have.... never mind.
The world today is rather techno.
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excellant portrail of the pic.
so true of many today sadly. -
An enjoyable piece of poetry, perhaps soon we will not be able to distinguish man from machine, reminds of one of bjorg's videos that picture, I think the song called all is full of love, a good poem.
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Wow, I love the way you expressed this.. just, wow..
Good pic too
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Awesome! Thought provoking!
The test of a taskmaster to coin few words and or phrases & have them become memorable, timeless... excellent... well done poet!! Brava!! Truly, you are a wordsmith
Wishing you much success in all of your endeavors
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THAT IS TIGHT.
TRUE, CONCISE, AND TO THE POINT.THE STYLE IS CRISP AND
CLEAR. IT SAYS TO ME IN METERED TERMS, 19,84, IS HERE
BE WELL AND "GOD" BLESS yOU. -
Wowzer!!!
A wicked quote indeed! Very well penned!
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Wow I love this! Yet another great peice from the mind of shoe man! LOL!!!! Awsome though really!
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