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Angel

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Let me be your Angel
and take you in these arms
to absorb the hurt within you
and shelter you from harm.

Let me wrap my wings around you
and take away your pain,
let them form a shield around you
so you'll not be hurt again.

Let me lift you from your heartaches
and put them in the past,
I will lift you to the heavens,
our hearts as one at last.

The Angels all will gather
to watch us as we fly,
they'll see the love within our hearts,
the passion in our eyes

We will soar the light fantastic,
two hearts, two souls as one,
together we will brush the clouds,
we will rise above the sun.

My wings will carry us upward,
on Angel's wings we'll soar,
our hearts and souls united,
now and forevermore.

Let me be your Angel
and give my heart to thee,
that we may paint the skies forever,
together, you and me.





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Author notes

Written for a special lady in my life at that time who was a victim of sexual abuse as a child..and something you never really get over

Contest: "That Broken Girl with the Broken Smile" option1

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  • raggyann
    January 5, 2008

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    your just so romantic
    its wonderful to see a man expose his love and charms
    it just does something to a womens heart
    and this poem did just that


  • Hope Angel silver member
    December 30, 2007

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    That was beautiful! Not exactly what I was looking for but we will have to see! I am sorry you had to go through that! Best wishes in mine and those other contest!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    December 20, 2007

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    A beautiful piece of writing. I am sure the lady it was written for would love it.. We never do get over our abuse we just need to learn how to continue living.
    I am sure you will make her feel safe.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Soulful Woman


    • The Madman silver member
      December 20, 2007
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      And thank you once again for yet another visit to one of my works and also for teh nice comments you have graced this page with,

      Evan


  • Angelic Princess21
    December 6, 2007

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    this is a very sweet write. congrats on all the trophies. thanks for sharing this its a beautiful write. s ~Angel~


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 30, 2007

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    Ah Ha I found One I haven't commented on. Congratulations on all the trophies they were well deserved. I really like this, You know why. This is so sweet. You can be my

    • The Madman silver member
      November 30, 2007
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      Thanks Cara, thanks so much again for you visit and kind comments, both alwaus treausred. And dno I cant pump them out as fast as you, must be the meds..lo. Thx again,

      Evan


  • Entwining Beauty
    November 28, 2007

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    wow ! I love this poem thank you so much for allowing me to read such beautiful poetry.

    • The Madman silver member
      November 28, 2007
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      Thanks so much for your visit to this pen of mine and the kindest of comments you have left for it, it is truly appraciated,

      Evan


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    How very beautiful and so healing to a broken spirit. A warm comfort just washed over me as I read these loving words! Lovely words...so gentle and sweet!

    Love~
    Az


  • F a t i m a
    November 18, 2007
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    wow!

    wow

    and wow! this is rrr-really so beautiful - exquisite!


  • Myjoy gold member
    November 16, 2007
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    awwwwwwwwww beautiful! sweet, loving, and just heart warming. Wonderful. Well done.


  • Lola Green
    November 16, 2007

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    Congratulations!

    You made it to the finals!

    Sorry to learn about the sadness, hope that things gets better!!

    Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry. I really enjoyed reading this!

    • The Madman silver member
      November 16, 2007
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the kind comments and the honor of being a finalist in your contest. And patience is teh key I guess and unfderstanding...and time..

      Thx again,

      Evan


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    November 16, 2007

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    wow this was really so lovely.... scary to think I have to compete with this great poetry....

    All the best in this contest!! I also agree that poetry gives us wings, and by reading all these beautiful poems makes me want to soar! It free my mind from trouble, and occupies my thoughts on the beauty in life! Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry. I really enjoyed reading this!

    Till next time...

    Becks

    • The Madman silver member
      November 16, 2007
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      Thank you

      Thank you too Rebekah-Ann...Yes poetry allows us to fly or maybe our hearts to soar is a better way to look at. I thank you for you wonderful comments and the best to you also..

      Thx again,

      Evan


  • PureRomance
    November 15, 2007
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    This is a very beautiful poem. You have such great words in passion with each line. Such alike are the poems of yours and mine. Both hopeless romantics I guess that one would say. For we dream of love that lasts much longer than a day. Good work here. You did a marvelous job.

    • The Madman silver member
      November 15, 2007
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      This is a very beautiful poem

      Thanks again for you kind comments. Added into notes what this was all about..a heartbraking story of a heartbroken lady.
      Thx again..

      Evan


  • X iMPERFECTiON x
    November 14, 2007
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    fantastic job!! i love it. good luck!!

    • The Madman silver member
      November 14, 2007
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      Thank you bothe Leslie and Broken home for you kind comments. Written a while back for a woman I was in love with that has suffered through some serious sexual abuse issues as a teen...

      Thx again,

      Evan


  • leslielovesthomas
    November 14, 2007

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    Amazing! Thank you so much for sharing this and good luck to you in the contest!

    Leslie


  • BeautifulFlame
    November 9, 2007
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    Beautiful!

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