With the morning sun rise
Thoughts of you fills my heart
Soft petals tap into my soul
I feel you close to me
Serenading a bloom of love's passion
I dance in your shining radiance rays
Melting my heart in warm embrace
of your precious priceless jewel love
caressing my essence
In moments of sweet desire
I inhale you with every breath
In burning longing ache
A kiss so powerful my lips still feel....
Your blissful presence inside me
brilliantly accelerating to passions sky
I know that forever
you capture my mind, which I am...
My core and very breath of existence
and who I'll ever be
with thoughts of you yet another day
A contest entry
- you are in my thoughts today... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 9, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I know that forever
you capture my mind, who I am...
My core and very breath of existance
and who I'll ever be
With thoughts of you yet another day
his is indeed a deep verse revealing the truth of
your soul and touching the depth of this universal philosphy of love...my friend..your words are truely bringing a kind of the flow having the revealation about the life behind its presentation..well done.. and thanks for entering in my contest..
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Thanks a million for hosting this contest
I greatly appreciated your visit and insightful comments 
I am so delighted you enjoy this poem 
poet
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Thanks a million I greatly appreciated your visit and insightful comments I am so delighted you enjoy poet
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Lovely rhythm!
The rhythm here is lovele the cadence and thought delicately embrace one another and contiue throughout; wonderfully well orchestrated
Wishing you and yours much success in all of your endeavors
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