How do i shake this shit
How do I make it go away
How do I ease the pain
How do I stop the tears
How can I repeat all of those years
How can I be so stupid
How can I be so weak
to let myself get into you.
Why get into you
Why believe everything yousay is true
Why are you so damn good
Why come and turn my world around
Why change my smiles into frowns
Why did you do this
Why did you do all of these things
to make me have all this pain.
How
Why
You tell me
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This is so real, so raw and so good!! I can tell this is from the heart. Great job!!
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you know what? Its like your in my head and heart.
this write totally surrounds me and my man relationship now. I mean...exactly...
I have to give it to you, you have mad talent in poetry
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i am feeling this one luv it
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So That I Can Touch Your Heart
I think that you are just one of the best poets on this site. You have a gift of expression and your words are Absolute. So for now on I am giving you the name Ms. Sexy tha Absolute 1. Whenever I refer to you, it will be as "MsSexythaAbsolut1". Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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I really like this piece. It's open and personal and honest. It really shows the emotion and pain that a lot of women feel when things go bad, especially in a relationship. We want to blame ourselves and understand what did WE do, when it really should be the other way around. They're the ones who messed up and they'll regret it in the long run. Great piece. - cgirl0410
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