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Losing A Best Friend


I thought you would always be there
I never thought I would be left behind
I thought you were my answered prayer
I never thought I could be so blind.

You are my best friend, soon to be gone
My heart feels empty, extremely void
I don't want to have to be withdrawn
But if I don't I will feel destroyed

The tears will come, I fear no end
For I promised I would never cry
But to lose such a dear friend
And have to say a final good-bye

I wish I could convince you to stay
But my words will fall on deaf ears
Filling my heart with dismay
leaving my eyes full of tears

So I will have to say my good-bye
and act like I don't even care
I know I promised I wouldn't cry
But you promised you'd always be there

Author notes

My best friend is moving back to his hometown in two weeks, and I am very crushed about it. I love him so much and soon he will be gone

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  • X ShatteredSoul X
    October 10, 2008
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    aww this is a very good poem...i loved it...good luck in the contest, thank you for entering


  • parntsoftwins
    November 8, 2007

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    I am so sorry for your soon to be loss. The poem is an amazing work of art. I feel the emotions in my heart as I read it. Well done.