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~~My PhiLosOphY~~

It's so funny
How we spend so much time
Just to know everything
Just to say weve found

ExAcTlY

What we were looking for

& then its gone
& we say theres nothing more to live for

But i mean if you've searched so long for

ThIs

Why can't you search a little more for

ThAt

Whats ahead of us

But when you get there
& you think you know it all

Think you have it ALL

You realize this whole time
You were so completly

bLiNd

To rEaLiTy
& that what you THOUGHT you had
Wasn't what you NEEDED
& what you DID have
Wasn't what you WANTED

So this whole search
& journey

For this
& for that
Was a whole complete

WaIsT

For you
& for TIME

So whats the difference
BeTwEeN wanting & needing
At this point?

It's all the same now
It's all the same
Pain
Same PLeaSUre

Same distance
reaction
& satISfaCtion

The real funny thing to this whole
Philosophy
Is that

This whole time you spent
Getting to KNOW some one
Or something
Or maybe it was EVERYTHING

You were really just been pushed so far back
& all that trust
& reality is maybe just a

DrEaM

& we awake & realize how

FaKe

LIFE can be
In itself
Within ourselves too

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.......wish i knew my self...........

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  • x-HerShatterdLife-x
    April 17, 2008

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    Hey hun, long time no speak, hope all is well and judging from this your writing hasn't altered abit....this is great work hun me love it lots xox rlly opened my eyes x


    • Icry4YOU2mrow
      April 21, 2008
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      Thnx!!!!!! yeah i wrote it back awhile i ago i was so lost. i had a bf & everything a guy i wanted to be with for 3 yrs now, but it wasnt enough it wasnt me it wasnt right. so i broke up with her and a week later the girl i wanted asked me out. since then ive been way happy. how are u? i miss u!


  • LovemeNHateme
    March 11, 2008
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    WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWO

    Ive read this befor bt i guess i never commented. WELL LET ME SAY LOVE IT.


  • pimp daddy satin
    November 23, 2007
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  • Shameless Tears
    November 11, 2007
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    WoW..

    This write is a total eye opener..and not like can opener...or maybe both..lol but no seriously people hear things and make it to like a million things..I love your philosophy! Great Write!

    ~Shameless


    • Icry4YOU2mrow
      November 11, 2007
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      really? i wasnt even tryning to make anything out of it! thats the whole crazy part! i was just haveing one of my thinking nights where i just needed to write to just feel alive & the next thing i know i have this philosophy poem in front of me with no title lol & there ya go! im glad you liked it though ya know?


  • My Last Breath.x
    November 9, 2007
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    This is actually really good. It's true aswell....Don't worry. You're not the only one.

    Ali<3


    • Icry4YOU2mrow
      November 9, 2007
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      Glad you liked. Thnx. im not worried, its just idk it was just a huge random of words that ran through my mind

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