Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Drowning In Holy Water

She's wearin' Gucci like a rainbow
An' she wears it oh! so well
Who'd a thought she's in a spiral
As she's on her way to hell
Jesus! she wears it oh! so well

Her innocence was quickly stolen
Like the visions in her head
Holy martyrs pay her homage
As they crawl into her bed


[chorus]
And she prays most night and day
Take me, take me further away
Hold me down
Don't let me drown
Drown in Holy Water
Drown in Holy Water

She's prayin' for a new deliverance
She's counting on her holy grail
The tears she used to barter
Are the one's she has for sale

[chorus]
Drown in Holy Water
As she cries her lament and shame
It's cold comfort in the morning's
When she prays to take away all her pain

[chorus 2x]
Drowning in holy water
Drowning in holy water
Drowning in holy water
Drowning in holy water

Author notes

"Grand Theft Autumn"
Drowning in Holy Water lyrics by myriad-dark (d e barnett)

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • Poetic Obscenity
    January 5, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    That is simply gorgeous..It's very..Beautiful I really like it.
    Thank you for entering the contest and good luck


  • Dragomiloff
    December 29, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    wow, I really really like this. the flow, the images, they're just great. I like the title, does it refer to 'Overcome'?


  • Simply Simple
    December 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Interesting, I wasn't expecting any songs. I definately liked this though. I'm sure I will have more to say on this particular piece later though. Best of Luck.

    ~ I liked how you are talking about how people never really see through the mask someone is wearing, if thecy wear it well enough. Great Job.


  • Fedrizzi
    December 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    lovely lyrics i must say, you are infact a gifted songwriter, i love your words on and use of the term "Holy water"


  • psychiatrists dream
    November 26, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    very well put together, you are very talented, keep up the good work,thanks for entering and good luc

  • ms. kitty kat
    November 8, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I absolutely love this. great job. I love how you used the song Holy Water. it is defenitely a different take on it. good luck in my contest.

    Kat

1 - 6 of 6