On this
night
you are
millions
of miles
away
just when
you were
going to be
in my arms
I may never
touch you
taste you
look in your
eyes
my dreams
dashed
upon your
shores
a second
time
and I
stand up
determined
purposeful
for only I
can do this
and it needs
to be done
if I die
trying
then that
is my fate
so be it
Author notes
It is true.
In a list
A contest entry
- Romantic Hearts (Show Your Emotions) ( Contest ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended November 9, 2007, 23 entries
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Powerful write. Seemed to be lots of emotion expressed in this piece. It made me think of how people may take risks when it comes to love and sometimes it's the only way for people to find out if love will work out or not. Keep writing.
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This is really good, sorry
Never ♥
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I'm so sorry
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...all is okay, Poet.
My love,
Lane
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powerful words of anguish, determination, longing and passion
what a shame it would be to never taste the sweetest lips of love
great write and best wishes
blessings,
Michelle
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wow! I feel the need in your words the urgent wanting to do, very well posted to make a statement of love, thank you for this entry and good luck...MM
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