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Morning Glory

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I lie there next to you in the morning,

sun streaming in through curtains

casts soft highlights to your hair,

to your face and to all that is you.

Your sweet, soft lips shimmer in that sun.

The Sandman still works his way

with you, but I don't mind,

for these moments are mine.

For as you bask, yet, in slumber

in that morning sun, I bask

in the Morning Glory of you,

the shimmering lips the night before

I was lucky enough to have kissed,

the mussed hair from our slumber

and from holding you there

as I tasted those lips.

I gaze upon the sheets that cover you

in your slumber. Still naked beneath them,

lying on your side, the sun

leaves no doubt that thou art woman

as it presents to me the sensuous silhouette of you.

Such wondrous curves to entice a man

had worked their way with me and wrought

in me the passions of the night before.

But there's more to the Glory in that morning sun.

Sweet, sweet scent fills the air, still, stirred

by the heat of the rays that strike us,

much like the heat in ourselves

that wrought those scents. The honeysweet scent of the

woman that is you entices me still

as does the vision before me

and the knowledge of the woman within.

As you lie there in slumber, I brush

back the hair from your forehead

and plant just one kiss in remembrance,

remembrance of our midnight sun,

our night of sharing of ourselves, our hearts

and our passions with one another.

Bright, bold and beautiful our lovemaking,

like the sun that shines upon you now.

I could lie here for hours on end

gazing at you like this and thinking

of our night past, but desire, too, to awaken you

for more of the same...

but you will always awaken,

and once so, all of these moments that

I so treasure will be gone until another morn,

so I let you sleep instead.....


then my alarm goes off and I realize

that it was I who was sleeping,

not you...


Sweet Dreams



 

 

 


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Author notes

Adult in Nature
Contest for the poets who think they can write imagery:
read...A Passionate Shower : Bronze (Poovey Lou)

your the one you choose(ebpoetry)
A "Homie" by choice (flip of a coin)
You can call me "Muffin"...my brother couldnt pronounce Evan as a child and it always came out Muffin..and I guess I am an old softie, too.
Contest lethora of One-Liners
Option>I'm buried beneath the bedsheets
where the thought of you still sleeps.

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  • daviscth silver member
    May 9, 2008

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    I just love the ending twist to this romantic piece because it was such a wonderful dream... You really captured my romantic side with this beautiful poem.


    • The Madman silver member
      May 9, 2008
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      Thanks again for the wonderful; comment left with this work. It was kinda funny, I was writing along and found myself in no man's land with seemingly no way to end it, and then the ending just came to me....of making it all a dream...my dream....lol. Thanks again,

      Evan


  • Luminescence
    March 5, 2008

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    Okay so listen, I was reading a nice romantic piece and then... lol you had to do that. But don't worry it was definatly worth doing, This was a wonderful poem.

    Thank you so much for entering and participating in my contest and good luck,

    ~lumin

    • The Madman silver member
      March 5, 2008
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      lol..sorry about that. the same thing kinda happened to me. I as writing along and getting to the point where it had to end it this just popped into my mind....that it was I sleeping and this was all a dream. Again, my apologies but happy that you enjoyed it,

      Evan


  • love my jose luis
    February 6, 2008

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    First off, wow, I really like the picture... now on to the poem...
    I love the description, it makes me feel like I'm actually looking at the person you are describing. I think that you have a great talent for writing. A lot of people I have noticed can't really have that much description or it takes away from the flow, but not you, you have a great description and flow... Good job on this, and good luck in my contest.
    ~Maria


    • The Madman silver member
      February 6, 2008
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      Thanks so much for such a wonderful comment you have graced this page and this work with,

      Evan


  • Tarja
    February 5, 2008

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    Congrats on the two gold the two bronze and the two honorable mention trophies, this was very beautiful and well written. Thank you for entering and good luck.


    • The Madman silver member
      February 6, 2008
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      Thanks so much for the wonderful comments left with this work,

      Evan


  • abuyi
    January 24, 2008

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    beautifull peice.. thanks a lot for enteirng it.. this contest is so difficult to judge now
    best of luck


  • Celticmoon
    January 12, 2008

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    A lovely piece of sensual writing that truly does hold some very vivid images for the mind to linger upon long after reading. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • infinitechaos07
    January 10, 2008
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    Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • creationsfromheart
    January 9, 2008

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    aw a true romatics words filled a page of beauty once again, this is extremyl beautiful, I was drawn in to the very last line, Sweet Dreams a perfect ending! Another wonder write form a brilliant man of romance!


    • The Madman silver member
      January 9, 2008
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      Thanks so much for the wonderful comments once again on this work,

      Evan


  • raggyann
    January 4, 2008

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    oh how very beautiful was this poem
    your words made this poem full of life
    what a wonderful poem my friend
    such beauty to the heart


    • The Madman silver member
      January 4, 2008
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      Thanks again for yet another visit and for the wonderful comment left on this work,

      Evan


  • Ephiphany
    January 4, 2008

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    Dear Poet...

    you have penned the most beautiful piece of ART I've seen in a while.

    Thank you so much for sharing such pleasure in writing.

    ephiphany♥

    • The Madman silver member
      January 4, 2008
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      Well..thank you soooooooo much for such a wonderful comment on this work, truly a wonderful compliment and coming from you even better. Thank you so much,

      Evan


  • silver-X-lining gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    This piece wasn't dirty pretty, and since one of the contest rules was that it had to be DP, I won't evaluate this piece when it comes to judging.
    However, about the piece:

    it's beautifully written. It's sensual, but also very sweet. Your word usage is carefully chosen and elegant, delicate almost. The piece was a little long, but that's my only critique.

    The beginning especially was superb.
    Again, I'm sorry that I won't be considering this when it comes to judging, but nicely written nonetheless.


  • azlyn gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    Oh my ..that was a sweet romantic and sensual journey! Such loving and warm words to bless a womans heart and make her feel beautiful and treasured...where have all the poetic and dreamy men such as yourself gone to? This is a lovely and enticing verse. Beautiful!!!

    Love~
    Az

    • The Madman silver member
      November 18, 2007
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      Oh my

      Told you I was the Proverbial Hopeless Romantic...lol. Just gotta find the right woman to appreciate it!

      Thx so much again,, Az, your visits and comments are truly treasured,

      Evan


  • leslielovesthomas
    November 18, 2007

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    Awe! This is so sweet! Very sensual, beautiful. I love the imagery so pretty!!! Thank you so much for sharing this and best of luck to you in the contest!!

    Leslie


  • jcat gold member
    November 17, 2007

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    How wonderfully soft and sensual.... *sigh*....I want to be this woman who is so treasured and loved.. You did an amazing job conjuring up thoughts of love and imagery of romance.

    • The Madman silver member
      November 17, 2007
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      wonderfully soft and sensual

      Thank you so much for such a wonderful review and comments. The *sigh* works wonders..and that is what love is supposed to be, soft, sensual, and so full of sighs,

      Thx again,

      Evan

  • Sam-a-nantha
    November 17, 2007
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    You did a great job with this. Very descriptive and visual. I enjoyed reading this, for sure.


  • Myjoy gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    I am speachless!!!!!! This read made me warm from within and just want too bask in morning glory. 'sigh' to lie in love at all. Brilliant!

    • The Madman silver member
      November 15, 2007
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      Speachless

      Hi..sometimes notes and comments come in and out so quiclly that we seem to miss one now and then...and if I did so you, mu apologies. Am so glad you like what I've done there...and sometimes being in love isnt all its cracked up to be...sometimes it hurts..Anyway thanks so much for your kind comments..and noy point or revie looking at all, but if you like love poems, you gotta read my latest, no review needed of course:

      http://allpoetry.com/poem/3611040

      Enjoy,

      Evan


  • danceswsquirrels
    November 14, 2007
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    blar! I can't choose!! you must!! ::scratches head:: Be creative... make it funny.. or serious.. but just let me know your designation..


    • The Madman silver member
      November 14, 2007
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      Blar!

      Lol..hope you got my reply...

      Evan

      • danceswsquirrels
        November 14, 2007
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        ::CRIES:: Noooo! I didn't get an actual answer!! :cries:: you're going to make me choose.. aren't you... ::sniffles::


  • Aurielle
    November 13, 2007

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    Wow really nice work here. Your mind is fulled of beautiful poetic usuage. I love how the second and third line sounds beautiful. AMazed

    • The Madman silver member
      November 13, 2007
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      Thank you, Aurielle

      So Glad you enjoyed it. Dont venture down this road too much, as Im more of a love and hopes, dreams kind guy...but written for a special lady in my life at the time with whom I had yet to share moments like these (hence teh "dreams reference). And I guess it worked at the time...lol....for it wasnt long after. Thank you again for you comments, and also for the award og Gold in your contedt. looking towards sharing the other side of me soon.

      Thx again,

      Evan


  • lesbian-in-love
    November 10, 2007
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    Nicely done on this one too. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.

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