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[your water at my feet]

[i'll.hold.on.] my bridge striving over your water,
take a look at just how much it took for it to crack;
I've always seen it. [you'll never let me down.]

[i'll.hold.on] hope shining like your eyes
reflecting my life
only to be overtaken by bitter tears
so fast. i can see you're real now [you'll never let me down.]

[i'll.hold.on] this is everything i want;
i can feel again.
your strong arms envelop me...i'll never look back
don't apologize, look in my eyes, i swear to you
for what we choose to let show [you'll never let me down.]

[i'll.hold.on] we'll always improve.
this love, this something..
exactly where i need to be;
finding myself in the end
closer to being alive.
All thanks to you. Thanks to you who'll [never bring me down.]

[i'll.hold.on] this is love
this is ours to hold.
in the end blame lies forgotten
the same place memories of broken hearts lie.
someday, they say, forever reaches reality
but can it? we want it.. we need it...
there's nothing we can't handle. [you'll never bring me down.]

[i'll.hold.on... you'll never. bring me down.]

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Parallels.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3588862
I love this boy more than life.

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Comments


  • Ravenblood
    December 16, 2007

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    Awww... Thats Awesome... and your guys comments are cute..

    keep up the good work darls.

    Claire-Anne


  • thisxisxme
    November 13, 2007
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    i.love.this... it completes us... <3


  • thisxisxme
    November 8, 2007
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    this.rocks.my.world..
    omg i friggin love you..
    you amaze me! =]