Heart beating wildly,
You're rooted to the ground.
Sweaty palms trying to catch hold
Of something to defend yourself
The predator looks at you greedily.
Is that a smile
At the corner of that cruel mouth?
You realise there's no escape.
Author notes
OPTION 5
A contest entry
- Show Me The Meaning of True Fear by SHadowHex666.
391 points, ended December 31, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Muses for the masses (options galore) by Goldfist.
500 points, ended March 28, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent word take and write, good luck in the contest, Josie
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oooooooooooo let me run away! incredible ending for this one! i could picture a vulture eyeing me, contemplating me as his next meal...
good luck
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
old-timey silverscreen
This pom reminds me of the beginning narration for the twilight zone or the outer limits or for an old-fashoned horror movie. Good luck in he contest. -
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it was ok could be longer however but good luck in my contest -
Now this is one person I wouldn't like to be in the presence of. I like this, as it's eeerie and yes, it remindx me of one of those 'what would you do?' programmes that I love watching so much.
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ahhaha, this is a very nice, simple write. i like it.
thanks for your entry and good luck!
stephanie =] -
So true, no escaping this predatory woman. Well done!
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