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You Make Me Beautiful

I know what true beauty is,
I see it everyday,
Carried in the wind, through the dust,
And the way you always say,
Those little things to me,
That always make my day.

There was once awhile ago,
When my heart was torn and frayed,
Then you came, took my hand,
And made it all go away,
Every time you have to go,
I wish that you could stay,
So we could talk, we could touch,
We could kiss, and laugh, and lay.

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  • Grateful
    January 25, 2008

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    this is a wonderful poem with sweet emotions wrapped in warm words....coming out straight from the depths of the heart...starting as good as ending...i really enjoyed it...keep up the good work....thank you