Like a rivers flow,
I am all part of this land,
this I've come to know.
Free as the eagle,
I am here to take my stand,
honored and regal.
Only in nature,
I feel free as life is grand,
full of adventure.
Author notes
Option 1 - Haiku - 3 stanzas traditional format 5/7/5
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
700 points, ended November 17, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Haikus aren't really suppose to rhyme, and I don't like how you used them.
But, I do like the poem you have penned. (Did I just contradict myself? I think I did.) It's beautiful, and you put a nice image in my head. It flows well, as any Haikus do, and rhyming poems do...
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To The Point
Yes, Life is the adventure
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