You are in my thoughts Today
Our memories fly like butterflies
Through my mind thinking of
The Endless times we've shared
And over the years,months,and days
You still flutter into my brain
My heart pounds thinking of you
Laughter dances past my lips
I go into a giddy state
Knowing you're around in my heart
So here I am thinking of you
Knowing forever I will always be
Thinking of you, hoping you're thinking of me
A contest entry
- you are in my thoughts today... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I Really Enjoyed this.
It Made Me Think Of My Emotion Toward Certain People.
And Of Memories =]
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I'm really glad you liked it!
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Good use of alliteration here. I liked the imagery.
Thanks for your comment.
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aww Thank you!
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So here I am thinking of you
Knowing forever I will always be
Thinking of you, hoping you're thinking of me
This is indeed a deep verse revealing the truth of
your soul and touching the depth of the philosphy of love...my friend..your words are truely
bringing a kind of the flow having the revealation about the life behind its presentation..well done..Thanks for entering in my conterst... -
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your welcome! ^_^
Thank you for your comment.
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Awwww so loving and beautiful here, oh that feeling sometimes, so painful and hard too, but it will always bring a smile to you my beverly the baby bee
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lol aww thanks Antonio...I'm a baby bee *buzz*
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