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we remember the moments




memories ache
from depths of
hollowed bones--

I reminisce
moments
instead of
years

as fresh betrayals
weaken
long forgotten
pleasures.




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20 words.

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    Truly expressive and immensely detailed. Thanks ever so much for sharing this... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.

  • vertigo beat
    November 9, 2007
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  • Miss Faith
    November 9, 2007
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    my goodness.

    aren't you just beautiful with your words baby.

    ♥


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    Ah the pain of cheating! I know it all too well. A wonderfully penned piece of work here.

    Blessed be,
    Billie Jean