Plain or milk?
You cannot be serious!
Chocolate is fun,
is life, is lovers.
Milk is for babies
and ageing mothers.
Plain chocolate's the one
that makes me delirious.
Author notes
My first contest entry,
and my first poem written "to spec" in a 10 minute fit of creativity at 1:48am.
A contest entry
- November New Member Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended December 7, 2007, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I think it's good start but the scansion is awful. Any ideas?
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Thanks for entering
Nicely written in that short time span. It is a great start.
Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance
Rosemary -
Welcome to All Poetry
Nice write with great imagery and a most interesing take on the contest prompt.
Thanks for entering our contest
Gaylene
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Welcome to AllPoetry
G'Day pavel
♥
I founds this very cute and funny.
I know my husband would have to disagree though seeing as his allergic to Chocolate
Great write
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Amanda
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I like, especially the "milk is for babies and ageing mothers" line.
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Mmmmmm chocolate. Is there really a bad kind of chocolate? Excluding, of course, the chocolate that has landed on my thighs and backside.
I got a nice little giggle out of this one. Good luck in the contest!
♥Heather♥
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