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[ i see specs of stardust in your eyes ]

i see specs of stardust in your eyes
sparkling throughout the starry night skies
shimmering and twirling for all to see
a dance of the heavens, meant for only me

i feel your touch upon my skin
explosions arise from deep within
love and lust encased as one
may all my pain become undone

i feel your lips pressed to mine
all planetary bodies in my heart align
little drops of heaven fall from your eyes
i knew that you loved me, that day that you cried

i see you heart entwined mine
it used to be dark, now a bright light shines
with every beat my dying heart makes
is purely and only, just for your sake

i see the love, the care, you feel
and i know that finally this is real
a touch, a love, a world unknown
and all the happiness of life is shown

you gave me back all i lost
blessed me with your love
and now i have you in my arms
a gift sent down to me from above

                                YouSavedMe

*whispers*ILoveYou

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  • Artistic-Soul
    November 8, 2007

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    very sweet and an excellent poem to express your love for someone who has given you so much
    well done i enjoyed reading this
    thanxs for the entry and good luck