i see specs of stardust in your eyes
sparkling throughout the starry night skies
shimmering and twirling for all to see
a dance of the heavens, meant for only me
i feel your touch upon my skin
explosions arise from deep within
love and lust encased as one
may all my pain become undone
i feel your lips pressed to mine
all planetary bodies in my heart align
little drops of heaven fall from your eyes
i knew that you loved me, that day that you cried
i see you heart entwined mine
it used to be dark, now a bright light shines
with every beat my dying heart makes
is purely and only, just for your sake
i see the love, the care, you feel
and i know that finally this is real
a touch, a love, a world unknown
and all the happiness of life is shown
you gave me back all i lost
blessed me with your love
and now i have you in my arms
a gift sent down to me from above
YouSavedMe
*whispers*ILoveYou
A contest entry
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Comments
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very sweet and an excellent poem to express your love for someone who has given you so much
well done i enjoyed reading this
thanxs for the entry and good luck

