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Quicksand #3

I am nearly submerged
By a quicksand pit of frustration,
And as I struggle,
The weight of my problems
Drag me down deeper.
Unlike a tangible quicksand,
Moving less to save myself,
Only ends in thicker agony.
If I am ever to be relieved,
There is no time to sit still.

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  • HaleyMary
    November 8, 2007
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    Powerful write. It made me think of how we can make ourselves feel like we are drowning in our own problems in life by maybe worrying a lot if we are going to be alright in life or if we question whether we are going to succeed in some things. Keep writing.