By light strokes does it commence,
Yet seems a mere reluctant caress;
The rhythm weak by a sense of fear,
The notion it seeks a pain to severe .
The tone ascends, as motion is intense,
The soul now possessed, passion overwhelms.
senses mesmerized a new vision portray,
& all material presence to distant darkness stray.
The rising notes reflect into shades of grey,
As naked forms embraced, the dim light betray.
the wine stained sheets, & scattered musical beat,
conceal the lovers, their sensual sighs made discrete.
His hands swiftly glide driven by sweet melody,
One on her inner thigh sways forth so boldly.
The other in constant grasps, the beauty provokes,
till the tension in climax a release invokes.
This divine state he lingers, till weary fingers compel
The echoing music to cease, & let loose the dreamer from the spell.
A contest entry
- Musical Erotica by Seeking Peace.
450 points, ended November 19, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your way with words is so fantastic, and to be able to weave such beauty! Well I'm positively green with envy! ^_^
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I like how you didn't delve into details,you made the write pretty mysterious....just beautiful...
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Whoa! I am completely blown away. This is the first I have seen of your work and it sets the bar pretty damn high. I just may have to stalk your work now.
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wonderful
this is wonderful and it is truly musical I can hear the music aw
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This is lovely, the beauty and the intimacy of this piece is wonderful
Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, I wish you the best of luck
Karen -
Wow! This was so beautiful, so passonate. I can see why you chose 'musical erotica.' It definately sent many erotic images through my mind.
good luck in the contest.
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