I'm finally living life for me,
Finding out who I trully am.
It's not an easy journey,
It's also one thats never ending.
In these past few months I've grown,
Matured and developped into a woman.
I'm ready to start living,
I'm ready to be the person I want to be.
When I look into my future I can smile,
It's all going to work out.
Somewhere out there is that special someone,
Even though I have no idea where he is.
I will be strong and stick to my independance,
I will not rush into giving out my body.
I want to do it all right this this around,
My body and mind has matured imensly.
I am far from the person I used to be,
Happiness is a feeling that isnt foreign.
I'm beginning to love the person I am,
Fate is on my side, my future is no longer bleak.
Author notes
A poem about how much ive changed and am still changing. Its about living life for me and nobody else. Its about finding that someone out there who loves me uncoditionally as I do them. Its all about life and maturing into an full fledge adult woman, body and mind.
Please tell me what you think
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I'm glad that you are finally becoming who you want to be and that you are finding happiness congratulations on this and I hope you continue along this journey...chrissy you are a good person and do deserve to find happiness
this was a great write keep penning and keep fighting
tash
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Great write.
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Good 4 U
I'm so happy you have realized these things. You'll live a better life if you value yourself and don't throw yourself at others who are undeserving. For editing I would first suggest a spell check, with a focus on contractions. Other agreement issues like finding the "one" but saying "them"--more than one--confuses the read. Your decision is a sound one, and your enlightenment on this issue rings loud and clear. Next revision could also focus on making each stanza and line more poetic through word choice, organization, transistion, etc. Wonderful! -
wow... this is what some of the kids in my 6 period class need to do!!! but they have no idea what the word means... haha. (A class full of seniors who act like they are 3 years old, I swear!) great work. I really like it. I'm going through the same thing. haha. keep up your great work!!!
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with the fulfilling promise of knowing you're becoming who you really are, this is such a loving action to allow yourself to commit to.... for the true self knows who it needs to be, and only the constant evolution from moment to moment can bring the ideals and realizations of this sort.... such a wonderful journey you are embarking on, so thank you for letting us in on just a little slice of the joy....
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Very good these sentiments you express in these lines - easy to read and understand. Use spell check and remember the apostrophe in all contractions. Liked the concluding line - summed it up very nicely. We all need to like who we are or we cannot like anyone else.
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wow i really liked your poem life is a long journey and i wish you all the luck i have to give to help you grow some more great job keep writin
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sounds good
sounds like you had a rough time but glad things are looking better for you... this sounds a lot like some of the things i wrote so i can relate pretty well... except i'm a guy... anyway... good write
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