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I wrote your name on my bedroom wall
I wanted to see it every morning

I walked the street of my dreams
with the little white houses scattered across it

I stepped into one of them
only to find you inside
I asked you what you were doing there
and you didn't answer

You looked right into my eyes, right through my soul
just like the first time I saw you, remember?
And even when you look away
you still find me

 

[it's so hard to put in words how you define me]

 

An angel wrote your name on my chest
Don't let the devil's hand cross it out with a blade

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  • Lj-
    November 8, 2007
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    Seems like a dream.
    It just has that atmosphere to it.

    Nice write.

    • Latradi
      November 12, 2007
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      thank you for your comment.
      i was trying to describe my thoughs... glad you liked it..