You are in my thoughts today,
Like many days before,
The more time passes on and on,
I think of you some more.
You are in my thoughts today,
Followed by my dreams at night,
Sometimes when I think hard enough,
I want to hold you tight.
You are in my thoughts today,
Again, again and again,
All I can do is live on with my life,
Not thinking; or trying to pretend.
A contest entry
- you are in my thoughts today... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hmm...
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You are in my thoughts today,
Again, again and again,
All I can do is live on with my life,
Not thinking; or trying to pretend.
This is indeed a deep verse revealing the truth of
your soul and touching the depth of this truth of love...my friend..your words are truely bringing a kind of the flow having the revealation about the life behind its presentation..well done.. and thanks for entering in this contest...
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thank you very much. i really appreciate that.
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Wow... you are awesome at rhyming lily, like I tell you, I can not rhyme worth crap. So excellent job...
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