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Illusion

What if this was all just an Illusion,
And I was dreaming everytime you were there,
What if when I fall,
I only hit thin air,

What if all my Dreams were failing,
But I couldn't even care,
What if my lifes not worth living,
Especially without you there.

Author notes

Ok this is my first poem in ages and I just wrote it straight up.

Be brutally honest

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  • elemental angel
    November 28, 2007
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    I think this is beautifully written.
    Bravo